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Monday, 30 October 2017

i might story

 I might story
I might have opened my bedroom door at 6 o'clock on sunday.  I Might have traveled in a really fast snowmobile i might have traveled on top of  the roller coaster at disneyland i might have met captain hook searching  for a talking bear 3 hour later i might have talk to the talking and said “captain hook is looking for you’’ the bear might respond to me and said “ where is he” i might ignore him and walk away i saw the chasing after me but he said wait i have something for you so then i stop and talk to him and said “what do you want” the bear respond to me and said “i have a brac slick for you that will transform you home” so i wore the brac slick and there i was at home in my bed at 8 o'clock opened my curtain grab a drink of water brush my teeth and brush my hair had a walk the end   


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7 comments:

  1. Cyrus30 October 2017 at 14:45

    I really like your post you did a good job

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  2. Unknown21 December 2017 at 10:49

    Kia Ora Sotheara,

    My name is Hazel, and I will be one of the people blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning Journey. You may remember me from when I came to speak to you and your classmates a few weeks ago.

    I really enjoyed your "I might..." story; what a fun idea! I thought about what it would be like to have a magical transportation bracelet and decided that it would be a great idea! My family live two hours away from me, and if I had a magical bracelet, I could visit them whenever I want without having to drive for a long time.

    We are thrilled that you've registered for the Summer Learning Journey with us. I know it can sometimes be tricky to get started. I have included a link to the week one activities, but remember, you can do them in any order! Check out the activities on our website, and then post your responses to the activities here on your blog site.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/week-one

    I am so excited to read all of your posts!

    Cheers,

    Hazel :)

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  3. Violina16 March 2018 at 10:55

    hi sotheara it is me violina i like your story because you put so much detail. I like your story because lot's of amazing word's. what wood you do next time .`

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    1. Sotheara24 September 2018 at 13:57

      hi violina thank for your positive comment.

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  4. Canada11 May 2018 at 14:17

    this is Funny i looooove it

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  5. Anonymous12 December 2019 at 10:31

    Bonjour Sotheara!
    Isabella From gilberthorpe school here!
    I really like this it had a lot of detail!
    Also... I always say this to my friends but, Did you think about them capital I's?
    Oh well. I think it was Hilarious!
    Anyways Blog ya later bye!

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